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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2004-09-08 09:31 AM

Dreams of yesterday
flow upon currents
into  the ocean of tomorrow.
With each rise of silver moon
the tides wash upon the shores
of life~

   Imprinted in the sands of time
   are the footprints of yesterday.
   The surf pounds upon the grains,
   trying to erase the past.

Time
      {oh yes time}
will not let go of the
sweet memories
that have washed upon
it's shores~

   In defeat the tide
   makes it's retreat
   back into the
   twilight of
   days gone by.

The river flows past
the channels of remember
into the dawn of tomorrow~

~It is there that my heart
   will forever sail
   in the vessels
   of your love~

(c)dmsmith Feb 02 {revised 9-8-04}

It's better than I could have planned..
it's made me who I am...
{Trace Adkins}

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

1 posted 2004-09-08 09:50 AM

Ah, reposts such as this
are so very enjoyable...

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2004-09-08 09:54 AM

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2004-09-08 10:29 AM

agreeing with the above comments, your heart is a tresure...beautifully written.
Enjoyed, and wishing you a fabulous day

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-09-08 10:33 AM

Beautiful sweet lady!
Hugs~

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have the sand in my shoes. ~

Daniel Storm
Member

since 2004-09-08

Posts 91
New York

5 posted 2004-09-08 04:32 PM

The tide and the surf, two of my favorite things. Good read.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

6 posted 2004-09-08 08:38 PM

Yummy Donna - simply food for the soul.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

7 posted 2004-09-09 07:42 AM

Gawd I hate when my time is so limited that I can't reply to all individually, but please know how much I appreciate each of you and your words. Peace ya'll, and THANKS

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

8 posted 2004-09-09 11:17 AM

you have such a beautiful soul luv you sweet

I don’t want the world to see me
cause I don’t think that they’d understand
When everything’s made to be broken I just want you to know who I am

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

9 posted 2004-09-09 11:19 AM

You write truth so well!
miscellanea

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

10 posted 2004-09-09 11:19 AM

Donna, this is so beautiful!!
I really enjoyed reading it.
Hugs,
Ethel

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

11 posted 2004-09-09 12:01 PM

timeless and true! what a powerful poem!

Rf

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

12 posted 2004-09-09 12:21 PM

liked this much

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