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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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between the lines what are the parts there exposed on unseen hidden embossed to the bare foot to the fingers with gloves when a lady wears a dress and forgets herself while reading about lovers and what they do alone when they read too about other lovers with pictures and music does darkness enjoy the view more than morning does from outside the window will the voyeur sky ever speak _____________Dark |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Hey kiddo, good morning, a better then great poem here... answering your question, I believe both morning and night also meld in joy for the two...enjoying the passion and feeling their happiness. Lovely |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah... as usual.. words to weave the imagery and the feeling into something more than simple lines on paper or thoughts of abstract.. always a pleasure to read.. and to learn |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
will the voyeur sky ever speak I am not sure that the sky will ever give up it's secrets. This was truly one of your best. Ya know, morning just isn't morning till I've had my daily dose of Dark...lol... Thanks for that. Morning hugs. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Should the voyeur sky speak, it would be written upon pink clouds that disappear like foggy mornings... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
This was...well, I am sure you know. Well done.  "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Perhaps the sky whispers what it sees, especially the darkened sky- SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Darling D, there is darknessss wrapped in daylight, with yes, always, ever the word. And of the sky...it speaks with trees, and waters the earth to hurry what it sees. Love, Reg |
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time prophet Member
since 2003-07-30
Posts 371In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees |
does darkness enjoy the view more than morning does from outside the window Darkness only enjoys the view when there is no morning window on the heart. |
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