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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Naked the morning slipped out of enough buttons to make it interesting I had traveled with the wind riding the breeze to a symphony where notes were playing softly a melody on cattails ringing through the air yellow and tan straw stood clearly ruffling among green where eternity stood naked right in front of me just some words cut out |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
as usual ma'am.... very nicely done.. always a pleasure to read your words |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Awww...thought for a moment you were telling us you'd entered a new pic for your profile...... Sorry, shouldn't joke about a seriously good poem, but these chances don't come every day (they don't???).... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I had traveled with the wind riding the breeze to a symphony where notes were playing softly a melody on cattails ringing through the air Perfect images Helen. As ALWAYS, I enjoyed your words. Good morning! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wonderful Helen .... ever wonderful. hugs, Chris |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
From where I stand eternity looks pretty good  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Perfect. Eric |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Interesting is just one outlook .... .... brilliant as the sun itself.  |
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Margot Member
since 2003-10-04
Posts 154 |
Wonderful Margot Love is something eternal, The aspect may change, But not the essence.- Vincent Van Gogh |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms slick nude is lovely and here you dressed it with see-thru and unbutton seductive truth |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this makes me want to travel |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Helen: this reminded me of this: " . . . such things, though rare in time, are frequent in eternity." - Byron "Cain" |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"I had traveled with the wind riding the breeze to a symphony where notes were playing softly" Spectacular writing! |
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Daniel Storm Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 91New York |
Good writing, nice way to look at things |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Please send me a photo.. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
very pretty writing! miscellanea |
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