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Perfect Paradise
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Perfect Paradise |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR 
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Green grass grows, Soft lushous reads, Felt between the toes. Bright Flowers bloom, A vorioty of colors, Styfening the eyes gloom. The birds sweet saranade, Such a peaceful song, Cleansing every harsh memory made. Clean fresh air, Refreshes the nose, Of stale smells, not known were there. A light rain falls, The taste is so sweet, A parched tongue calls. A heart wheeps, For what is only seen in dreams... A lonely girl wakes, Invisioning her dream, Searching for a way, To find that perfect paradise, If only for one day? |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...sometimes I would settle for a not perfect paradise...James |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Nice talent. Can I suggest you put it into word and use spell checker. I do when I remember. Like the words, like the talent. Dave |
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sim0riah Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 253Wyoming USA |
The birds sweet saranade, Such a peaceful song, Cleansing every harsh memory made. That is nice..Well done sim0riah Only at night you can see the depth of the sun |
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