Open Poetry #33 |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
"Kind words can be short and easy to speak, but their echoes are truly endless." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like this...James |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
thanks, james snow |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
to singe your fingers in the after thought, of who wore the silhouette beneath your sheets. Love the above lines and the image behind them. Maree The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Cool. I like this one as it says many things. :-) |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
So profound, Snow! A black orchid?! WoW! .....jo |
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klm Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 58New Orleans, Atlanta |
under umbers expression. rewiping my brow to engage in the thoughts provoked. true talent |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very, very well written and presented Snow!! Hugs, Chris "At one glance |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Your words wear a whisper that speaks deep- Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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sim0riah Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 253Wyoming USA |
Very nicely done..I'll have to figure out how to put visions with mine.. sim0riah Only at night you can see the depth of the sun |
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time prophet Member
since 2003-07-30
Posts 371In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees |
who wore the silhouette beneath your sheets. Makes one wonder if they should take a new bed before a new lover so as not to incur thoughts of what lies thereunder. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You conjur up so many after thoughts, and always, you leave me reeling! Brilliant poety, Snow~ |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
i could explain it but i think that might ruin it... :-) besides, i love seeing where my words take people.. and reeling, is wonderful!!! thank you all so much !! snow |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
that's awesome |
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