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sim0riah
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0 posted 2004-09-07 02:24 PM


Only in the morning
I wake to find you by my side
sleeping peacefully
and rested, by the night

Only in the morning
I find myself gazing at your beauty
like I've never seen it before
something new and oh so right

Only in the morning
I can say to myself
another day of love
let the sun shine bright

Only in the morning
I get my first kiss of the day
and get lost in your eyes
Just at your very sight

Only in the morning
I wish for the night to begin
to forego the remaining day
so when I wake in the morning
I can say I love you
In the morning all over again


© Copyright 2004 Richard Konkler - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-09-07 03:19 PM


Very sweet!

~sky

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Do your best, just keep on laughing
It's all on you, there's always a brand new day. -Avril Lavigne

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2 posted 2004-09-07 03:20 PM


aww...this is sooooo sweet really enjoyed this
Kristabell
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3 posted 2004-09-07 05:50 PM


Beautiful!!
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4 posted 2004-09-07 10:11 PM


This was nice.  I hope this feeling in the morning stays with you all day.
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5 posted 2004-09-07 10:42 PM


yes liked this


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6 posted 2004-09-07 11:26 PM


Beautiful

Margot

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2004-09-08 12:40 PM


Silky...James
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8 posted 2004-09-08 04:49 AM


Only can the heart feel so much love...lovely devotion! poetry full of emotion!
to be greeted in the mornings like this would be bliss!

~Very Romantic

Love and Hugs
~ARH

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9 posted 2004-09-08 04:54 AM


This was a touching write.  I feel the same about waking up next to my wife.  I can relate.  Your poetry is charged with emotion.  Very inspiring.  Another great poem.

Warm regards,

Kevin

sim0riah
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10 posted 2004-09-08 10:29 AM


Thank you everyone for responding..I tried for a while to get on this site and now am very pleased to finally make it

sim0riah

Only at night you can see the depth of the sun

Sim0riah

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11 posted 2004-09-09 12:12 PM


Back to the top...James
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12 posted 2004-09-09 03:06 AM


never been a morning person, but this is a beautiful write
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13 posted 2004-09-09 10:13 AM


I'm sending this one back up as it should be read by all....wonderful words to sooth a heart
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14 posted 2004-09-09 01:15 PM


How very beautiful!!! *S* I envy you such mornings... *S*
sim0riah
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15 posted 2004-09-10 12:41 PM


Thanks again all

sim0riah

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