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Dulcinea, Sliding through Strings and Bars
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Dulcinea, Sliding through Strings and Bars |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
The tintinnabulation The tintin nab u The tin, tin Full of ale Splattered on his face As bells rang Inclining her to leave the ugly place. “Sweet Dulcinea, wingless bird Hear the strings reverberate A hidden word; Little bird, little bird Fly within coiled strings” “I have a destiny as you, Sir, Have eyes to see; To make this world a better space Passing ale and smiling face To those without a hint. I have yet to clean this place Hunker shoulders, remove the drunks Climb the stairs to lay them in their bunks; Scrub the tables, stack the chairs, Sweep the crumbs and wipe the –“ “Tears. I see behind blue flamed eyes. Young one, is it not unwise To free the dripping of the years, Put aside the mirrors and climb Within piano’s strings? Shall I throw my lance To spear a song for you?” “Suppose I was to fall with you Among the gold wrapped strings? My voice has been toneless, My body boneless, as it toiled In drunken night. How could this bird gain Unquestered flight?” Against the stone with shine of sand, Upheld the wall a cell of man; Incoming dreams On paper land Weaving light amid weighted Chains. Cervantes, man of bold. His final days, a breath at hand. “I’ve never done this, as you can see. Take my hand, Don Quixote, Lead your way.” As he hummed her song More Softly each refrain Decrescendos moved her From ivory key and wooden grain. She danced among the spiral string Grasping one, Then to another fling As words resound to book. Dulcinea, my sweet Dulcinea. It is you who’ve led your dreams. It is you, who I’ve seen, Sliding through cell bars As if winged among the strings. It is you who have led me Through the pages of your song. My Sweet Dulcinea [This message has been edited by miscellanea (09-07-2004 08:03 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Darn and if this isn't library bound... such a  as it is!Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close... |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
A story well told, Naturally the nature of it makes it my tone, But a story so told Become for all and for no ones alone. Enjoyed Gloom |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Glad you liked it, Karilea. I couldn't sleep last night because of this Little Bird. She woke me up at 3:00. At 4:15, I figured I might as well venture with her, as I knew I wasn't going to lose her, only lose sleep! This is the product. She was looping in and out of my piano strings. I tried to compare the strings with the bars that Cervantes suffered behind for such length. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Professor Gloom, Glad you enjoyed my "poem of a story". Have a good day, Sir. Thanks for your comment. miscellanea |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Ms celania You, like Dulcinea are untouchable (as it should be) by this Knight, physically (just like the Don could never really touch the hand of his lady...) But it has touched my mind with thoughts of jousting windmills... enjoyed --------ice ><> Come read to me some poem, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How breathtakingly beautiful!! This is headed straight for my library... Absolutely love it!! Extremely well done. Hugs~ ~ Summer can't be over... |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
ice, How kind of you to say. While jousting windmills, beware of their arms, for they can send one into higher flight! Thank you very much for your kindness. Ms celania Enchantress, You flatter me so. I'm glad you like it. Thanks for everything. miscellanea |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
How can you write so well when you are experiencing such pain and frustration!?! My goodness, you certainly are a wonder! This is an incredibly creative write! It appears you are on the mend, Missy! I continue to send distant healing your way! Loves 'n hugs, Linda |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Linda, It is SO GOOD to hear from you! I have been worrying about you, as I haven't seen your daily posts. Thanks for sending such nice words and that wonderful healing. hugs to you, Earth Angel! Missy |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
 impressive! "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a beauty! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
This is the result of some Master at work OK fess up, who are you really! Amazingly creative and delivers a message well, thought out...this was brilliant, and would love to hear it to music! BRAVO! |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Susan, Thanks for the cute applauding icon and your kindness. Have a good evening. miscellanea Dixie, You are too kind, Dix. Glad you like it. Glad you stopped by! miscellanea Lee, I'm afraid if you keep that up, I will be unable to write anything for fear of disappointment! Thanks for the smile. Your comment is very generous! Thanks, miscellanea |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
“Suppose I was to fall with you Among the gold wrapped strings? My voice has been toneless, My body boneless, as it toiled In drunken night. How could this bird gain Unquestered flight?” Exquisite!! However annoying that little bird was, I hope you gave her an extra portion of seeds. *S* Excellent work!!! |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Suthern, You know, I had some bread crumbs left over in kitchen... I'm hoping she'll remember her way home, as I left a trail of crumbs. Thanks for the great compliment. You couldn't have flattered me more. cathy |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Great write! Eric |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Eric, Glad you like it. Thanks for the visit. It has been my pleasure. miscellanea |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
“Suppose I was to fall with you Among the gold wrapped strings? My voice has been toneless, My body boneless, as it toiled In drunken night. How could this bird gain Unquestered flight?” I once knew a poet named Dulcinea, and yes, she flew away with him, and neither one has ever been seen again. And I was the lonesome bird, and everything still remains the same. This is awful pretty miscellanea~ You drove it home for me. |
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Kevo Member
since 2004-06-02
Posts 466Navarro County, Texas, USA |
Proof that there is a God. This poem is incomparable. Perfection or nearest to it. I am compelled to leave my jaw on the floor for a while. This is one for the record books. As fine a poem as any on any bookshelf and of any author. You are divinely gifted. Kevin |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Yes, indeed, it's true. One of your better ones, for sure! love you, jo |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Bluesy, Somehow I picture you with wings, one who could fly within the strings. Dulcinea. I'm glad you could identify with this. This was a special write that came to me in the middle of dark. It just flowed with no corrections or editing, something that rarely happens to me. Maybe it came so you could read it...Suppose? miscellanea |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Kevo, You highly flatter me! In response to: "Proof that there is a God. This poem is incomparable. Perfection or nearest to it. I am compelled to leave my jaw on the floor for a while. This is one for the record books. As fine a poem as any on any bookshelf and of any author. You are divinely gifted." Yes, I definitely know there is God. He is the One who gave us imagination and the ability to be inspired. This was a poem inspired. I don't consider myself at all gifted, but sometimes I'm more driven and creative than others. You just happened to find such a time. I haven't written any good poetry since. However, if your interested in prose, I did write a prose that was inspired: /pip/Forum15/HTML/002171.html It was about a present day wedding, but somehow or other, I tied it to the Civil War through a quilt that was given to my Southern cousin. It was made from the uniforms of soldiers fallen from both sides. I think it's rather unique. Maybe not perfect, but very different. If you enjoyed this poem, perhaps you would enjoy the prose. Thank you very much for your generosity in response. I had to pick up my jaw from the floor before responding to you! It was a very warming message to wake up to. Thanks again, miscellanea |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Jo, I'm glad you like it. It's one of my favorites. Thanks for all your support. Love you, Little Sis, cathy |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Jo, Thanks, sweet sister. I'm glad you like it. You have been a big support to me, encouraging me to write. Thanks. cathy |
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