Open Poetry #33 |
The music in you |
Margot Member
since 2003-10-04
Posts 154 |
The music in you The truth I see has set me free My world it set apart It echoes low the muses know The song that's in my heart The song that still commands my will It does not fade away I'll walk beside with you inside Each of my passing days The sweetest lark sings in the dark His melody is true My path is sure, love does endure The music is in you Margot Hill 07Sep04 Love is something eternal, The aspect may change, But not the essence.- Vincent Van Gogh |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"The sweetest lark sings in the dark His melody is true My path is sure, love does endure The music is in you" How lovely and lyrical! Very much enjoyed! Hugs~ ~ Summer can't be over... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Yes, I agree with my sister Enchantress ... very lovely indeed. hugs, Chris "At one glance |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a great rhyme scheme here and fantastic theme well done! |
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Margot Member
since 2003-10-04
Posts 154 |
Enchantress, Nightshade/chris, Passing shodows, Thank you all very much Margot Love is something eternal, The aspect may change, But not the essence.- Vincent Van Gogh |
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