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Margot
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0 posted 2004-09-07 06:16 AM



The music in you

The truth I see has set me free
My world it set apart
It echoes low the muses know
The song that's in my heart

The song that still commands my will
It does not fade away
I'll walk beside with you inside
Each of my passing days

The sweetest lark sings in the dark
His melody is true
My path is sure, love does endure
The music is in you

Margot Hill
07Sep04

Love is something eternal, The aspect may change, But not the essence.- Vincent Van Gogh

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Enchantress
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1 posted 2004-09-07 09:11 AM


"The sweetest lark sings in the dark
His melody is true
My path is sure, love does endure
The music is in you"

How lovely and lyrical!
Very much enjoyed!
Hugs~

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have the sand in my shoes. ~

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just out of reach
2 posted 2004-09-07 09:50 AM


Yes, I agree with my sister Enchantress ... very lovely indeed. hugs, Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet

passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-09-07 12:50 PM


a great rhyme scheme here and fantastic theme

well done!

Margot
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4 posted 2004-09-07 09:51 PM


Enchantress, Nightshade/chris, Passing shodows,

Thank you all very much

Margot

Love is something eternal, The aspect may change, But not the essence.- Vincent Van Gogh

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