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EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

0 posted 2004-09-07 12:07 PM

For Fate Persists

My restless heart, oft tears apart,
The love she's repeatedly bestowed,
Her works of art; give no fresh start,
To my narrow medieval mode.
In seclusion, there's illusion,
And I'm wedded to its fable,
Yea preclusion, disillusion,
Keeps' mine own heart and want's stable.

Ignore her needs, her soul that bleeds,
And live within narrow confines,
Yea she concedes, that widow's weeds,
Oft necessity undermines.
Never grant trust, or readjust,
Your thinking so you might conform,
For love's unjust, merely a thrust,
Of surrender which we perform.

'Tis better sir, if we deter,
From the fleshly act of love,
Oh oui monsieur, I do prefer,
To remain intolerant of;
A single kiss, where hate insists,
That what we share this day will die,
For fate persists, that the abyss,
Yawns open when she says, "Good-bye!"

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-09-07 12:31 PM

WOW, Kevin! I think you stay on track just fine! Bravo for you, sir!

Kevo
Member

since 2004-06-02

Posts 466
Navarro County, Texas, USA

2 posted 2004-09-07 12:37 PM

Your writing is brilliant and awe-inspiring. It is a treat to read the work of such incredible talent. Your poems are sweeping, epic, examples of classical writing at its very best. Your posts are always so eloquent, visual, and thought-provoking. All of your posts that I can manage to get my hands on a real privelege to share in.

Warm regards to, sir.

Kevin

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2004-09-07 01:29 AM

Indeed, Fate ofttimes does have a fickle finger!

A very fine piece of writing, Dear Evocative One!

May the Fates be kind to you on your life's journey!

EA

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-09-07 02:45 AM

dang Kevin...just wow!

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

5 posted 2004-09-07 04:46 AM

WOW!!

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

6 posted 2004-09-07 01:24 PM

Such treasures to read before heading
off for the day.

Give me more if you please.

;-)

ps.

missed you

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2004-09-07 08:09 PM

Well done Kevin, enjoyed this and the
inner rhyme that you used to spice the
lines up just a tad. Nice.

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

8 posted 2004-09-07 08:11 PM

wow very nice

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