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EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

0 posted 2004-09-07 12:06 PM

An Abstract Sea of Thought

On high, velvety swans on outstretched wings,
Soar on the murmuring winds of concord,
So glide, the colors of love, my heart sings,
As I wait for my need to be restored.

Oh time's movement is delectably sweet,
It's as magical as this breath I draw,
And I knew a time when life was complete,
And the beauty of thee held me in awe.

Those days have been swept away by the tide,
They've been cleansed away by heartache's backwash,
Between us a continental divide,
Ensures that through the muck we will not slosh.

I once closed my eyes just to see clearly,
Your ardor for it was my only light,
But now I can say to thee sincerely,
No more in kisses would I drown this night.

Trembling from the recollections I have,
These deep breaths' are neither sweet nor tepid,
It seems that for thy love I was a knave,
So beneath the high seas let love be hid.

Anxiously I draw in my deepest breath,
And descend towards the dark underneath,
In Davy Jones Locker I would meet Death,
And this ode is all I have to bequeath.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2004-09-07 01:41 AM

Kevin,
I really enjoyed this write. The "thee"s and "thy" are too much for me. But afterall, it is your write. Nicely done. By the way, it probably comes as no surprise to that I always enjoy a romantic write.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-09-07 02:41 AM

Kevin, don't you ever ditch your style

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-09-07 12:07 PM

Love it Kevin...absolutely love it!!!!!!!
Hugs~

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have the sand in my shoes. ~

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2004-09-07 12:22 PM

Oh time's movement is delectably sweet,
It's as magical as this breath I draw,
And I knew a time when life was complete,
And the beauty of thee held me in awe.

this one sways the reader back and forth until they are at one with the words...lovely

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

5 posted 2004-09-07 01:27 PM

One word..... Love It.Oh thats two words.

three for the folder all in one day.

You my Sweet are giving me more inspiration.

;-)

Amour Vous my dear

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