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Open Poetry #33
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kaile
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0 posted 2004-07-09 02:48 PM


embrace
sensitive you
throw me a movie twist
evoking pleasure with punchline
blessed me
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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2004-07-09 03:01 PM

adorable, I love brevity, especially when it says so much. Well done.
Soleil Noir
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2 posted 2004-09-21 10:08 AM

Very good, kaile...
LeeJ
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3 posted 2004-09-21 10:21 AM

smiles and hugs...enjoyed
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Gaia
4 posted 2004-09-21 10:28 AM


kaile, will a poetic embrace suffice?

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