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Open Poetry #33

Peotry Within the Poem

mrmojorisin5908
Member

since 2004-05-03

Posts 103
Colorado

0 posted 2004-09-06 03:02 AM

Let us recognize it is time to vent our humility
A simple poem written in abstract brings vanity
A stanza brings a fire in our eye and a tear to our heart
Is it intellegence or brilliance?
Whatever caused the writer to write made light
Of a situation that existed in our minds to be expressed
Time and time again a poem can be evaluated
but the beauty of it is that it's art in itself
And we start the art from inside our very head and it ends.

Andrew A.
"I am working to make myself a visionary: you won't possibly understand, and I don't know how to explain it to you. To arrive at the unknow

ShiningWindHaze
Member

since 2004-09-06

Posts 138
California, United States

1 posted 2004-09-06 07:47 AM

up through sky down through mist
left past oceans right through kiss
express lockets things so dear
emotion, words, and even fear of fear
and tears we cry by words and memories we sigh
held and knit close to strangers who think alike we write, well, because we write.

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