Open Poetry #33 |
At the tone the time will be... |
~K~ Member
since 2004-07-27
Posts 148 |
Time to write it down again, the way you free me from my skin. The way you get inside my head, illicits inspiration. Time to find the exit signs and proceed with drawing lines worth stepping over. It's time to chart the map to circle your location to recognize and grasp the implications and dive in regardless. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
~K~ -- WOW, dive in, yes you did! Much enjoyed! .....jo |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Your title drew me here, and I'm glad it did! Time to write it down again, the way you free me from my skin. The way you get inside my head, illicits inspiration. Nifty way to put it. A wonderful read from title to end. A keeper indeed. miscellanea |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
fantastic ending! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
dive in regardless... sometimes thats the right answer and whatever happens, happens swim carefully |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Yes. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ha! I love this . . . Seems like my life's motto - sheesh |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
I like this, very much, your writing reminds me of mine, though I have noone special to be my inspiration...sigh...want to trade places? |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
'the way you free me from my skin.' loved that line! "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
agreeing with Susan here, loved those lines! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I used to be quite the procrastinator. Now I tend to just jump right in! If I always waited to be motivated or inspired, I would not get nearly as much done as I do in my life ~ and there would also be a lot of missed opportunities! Yeppers! First I intuit, then I dive in and do it! lol EA |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I liked the way this felt...happy feelings |
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