Open Poetry #33 |
Just You and I |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Just You and I When you excited me, you set my whole world into rapid motion, like a roaring waterfall, like waves in the ocean. I would love to be the man you wrap your arms around, to be dear to your heart, so we could settle down. Everyday, a new day to caress and hold you tight. Each night, having the thrill of kissing you goodnight. We'll share the earth, the sun and the moon, and a billion stars in the nightime sky. Just the two of us, just you and I. JamesLee September04 2004 |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Very romantic poem, JamesLee. Did you give it to her? ....jo |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
such a romantic heart |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you iliana and MGROVES...no I haven't given it too her as of yet...I usually give her two at a time on a nice card...she has quite a collection...James |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
We'll share the earth, the sun and the moon, and a billion stars in the nightime sky. very nice; enjoyed |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
very lovely |
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sim0riah Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 253Wyoming USA |
Very nice indeed..I enjoy reading and writing poems like this..It makes me feel there is hope and love in the world after all sim0riah Only at night you can see the depth of the sun |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
had to come back |
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E S West Member
since 2004-08-31
Posts 116California |
A lovely write of love.... E S West "always be true to SELF, and follow your heart.." |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Ah James... This is so romantic! The thrill of love, the excitement of touch... It's all written here... _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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