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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-09-04 07:31 PM


Just You and I

When you excited me,
you set my whole world
into rapid motion,
like a roaring waterfall,
like waves in the ocean.
I would love to be the man
you wrap your arms around,
to be dear to your heart,
so we could settle down.
Everyday, a new day to
caress and hold you tight.
Each night, having the thrill
of kissing you goodnight.
We'll share the earth, the
sun and the moon, and a billion
stars in the nightime sky.
Just the two of us,
just you and I.

JamesLee
September04
2004

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iliana
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1 posted 2004-09-05 01:21 AM


Very romantic poem, JamesLee.  Did you give it to her?   ....jo
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2 posted 2004-09-07 05:05 AM


such a romantic heart


JamesMichael
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3 posted 2004-09-07 07:22 PM


Thank you iliana and MGROVES...no I haven't given it too her as of yet...I usually give her two at a time on a nice card...she has quite a collection...James
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4 posted 2004-09-08 09:05 AM


We'll share the earth, the
sun and the moon, and a billion
stars in the nightime sky.

very nice; enjoyed

LeeJ
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5 posted 2004-09-08 09:13 AM


very lovely
sim0riah
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6 posted 2004-09-08 11:29 AM


Very nice indeed..I enjoy reading and writing poems like this..It makes me feel there is hope and love in the world after all

sim0riah

Only at night you can see the depth of the sun

Sim0riah

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7 posted 2004-09-10 12:22 PM


had to come back


    


E S West
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8 posted 2004-09-10 06:01 PM


A lovely write of love....  E S West

"always be true to SELF, and follow your heart.."
" Ignorance is the root of all evil "

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9 posted 2004-09-11 10:31 AM


Ah James... This is so romantic! The thrill of love, the excitement of touch... It's all written here...

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

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