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ecrivan
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0 posted 2004-09-04 05:27 PM


An urge for souls to express
central points fan out, digress
in the social discourse, discussions form
an idea becomes the invention of a day


Impulses put to practice in rainy weather
over hurdles a horse leaps, held by tethers
in the midst of a solar solution
there could be part man, part evolution
falls into parental mode at sounds of kid laughter
uses modests tools to create a sudden urge...

with id, ego, superego urges
life on the daily planet surges

As part of the child to adult step by step plan
central points fan out to fill larger demands
leap over hurdles and obstacles held at bay
invention becomes the norm of yet another day...

with id, ego, superego urges
life on the daily planet surges


Fancy the urge while tastes themselves evolve
tastes causes man to develop resolve
on woven discussions created from forms
impulses feed needs for earnest reform.

with id, ego, superego urges
life on the daily plant surges
ebbs, as tides under gravity's pull
I'll walk away from my table full.





[This message has been edited by ecrivan (09-05-2004 11:05 AM).]

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iliana
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1 posted 2004-09-04 05:55 PM


"An urge for souls to express
central points fan out, digress
in the social discourse, discussions form
an idea becomes the invention of a day"

How true!  Enjoyed.  ......jo


ecrivan
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2 posted 2004-09-05 02:07 PM


thanks for commenting Ilana


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