Open Poetry #33 |
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With Lavender Tea and Quiet |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind ![]() |
He leaves me beside the river silently stillness hanging in the bough of trees I watch the shadows fall and fade with the light play the delicate music with lavender tea and the smell of cigarettes even when quiet, he seems to understand and jokes anyway peaceful break of how the moon spills light upon the water the river of sound is so unseen -- reaching my heart and I pray for rain so we can feel the water Stillness of night will you think of me in summer as a soft whisper on orchid dreams as I bare my palms to winters arrival and the harpist of ambernight words will remind me your eyes are the color of storms dipped in indigo ink remember the laughter as you rest like a lover in the walls of my heart I don’t want the world to see me |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
always a wonderful write |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Mmmmm, nice. ![]() Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lauren my dear, you must publish a book!! Your writing has an exquisite quality all it's own. Another gem of a keeper. ~Hugs pretty lady~ ~ Summer can't be over... |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lauren, Nancy Lee is right, again! ![]() If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"even when quiet, he seems to understand and jokes anyway peaceful break of how the moon spills light upon the water the river of sound is so unseen -- reaching my heart and I pray for rain so we can feel the water Stillness of night will you think of me in summer as a soft whisper on orchid dreams" I'm stickin' to Wow... ![]() |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
even when quiet, he seems to understand You're lucky to have a person in your life who understands and accepts you just the way you are. How could he not! I'm so glad this came back up, it is exquisite in it's entirety. Hugs honey~ |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful!! Eric |
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