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""""" ------ To be happy about to loose teh love from far away ------ """"
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
Once upon a time ... There is this lady of mine ... I thought i understood ... But the thoughts were made of wet wood ... I do not and never regret ... What it was she made for mee just like an effect ... But one i know ... It was only a show ... Else she would have been so full of mood ... Which i never did, more than litle I could ... But she didnt have the strenght ... To help the man through in lenght ... So he let her go ... With her thinking so and so ... But he will never forget ... Its only the way he will always and ever regret ... She were a bird in the sky ... I was the other, thats no lie ... On cloud 111 ... That were our thought of heaven ... See her once there ... When we have passed and allowed to be aware ... In love ... Myheart has kept this pretty white dove ... Thoughts of past time hope you enjoy. Smiles Jes Life is for me to be - but always with a smile ! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
smiles good to see you again Jes this is a heartfelt, touching poem |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
Hi Passing Smile, good to see you too, i do not have so much time these days but i step by every know and then to read a litle poetry, and i always enjoy. Hi James Michael Good to see you enjoyed. Smiles Jes / Dreamer Life is for me to be - but always with a smile ! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"On cloud 111 ... That were our thought of heaven ... See her once there ... When we have passed and allowed to be aware" I enjoyed this part the most, Jes. It's nice to see your smiling words here again. |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
Hi Midnitesun Yeah those two sentences tells alot. And thanks for ya comment. Smiles Jes / Dreamer Life is for me to be - but always with a smile ! |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
i really liked this  |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
Hi MGROVES Glad ya enjoyed. Smiles Jes / Dreamer Life is for me to be - but always with a smile ! |
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