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Jes
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0 posted 2004-09-03 02:23 PM



Once upon a time ...
There is this lady of mine ...

I thought i understood ...
But the thoughts were made of wet wood ...

I do not and never regret ...
What it was she made for mee just like an effect ...

But one i know ...
It was only a show ...

Else she would have been so full of mood ...
Which i never did, more than litle I could ...

But she didnt have the strenght ...
To help the man through in lenght ...

So he let her go ...
With her thinking so and so ...

But he will never forget ...
Its only the way he will always and ever regret ...

She were a bird in the sky ...
I was the other, thats no lie ...

On cloud 111 ...
That were our thought of heaven ...

See her once there ...
When we have passed and allowed to be aware ...

In love ...
Myheart has kept this pretty white dove ...

Thoughts of past time hope you enjoy.

Smiles

Jes

Life is for me to be - but always with a smile !

© Copyright 2004 Jes Didrichsen - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-09-03 03:58 PM


smiles

good to see you again Jes

this is a heartfelt, touching poem

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2004-09-04 12:43 PM


Enjoyed...James
Jes
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3 posted 2004-09-05 04:47 AM


Hi Passing

Smile, good to see you too, i do not have so much time these days but i step by every know and then to read a litle poetry, and i always enjoy.

Hi James Michael

Good to see you enjoyed.

Smiles

Jes / Dreamer

Life is for me to be - but always with a smile !

Midnitesun
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4 posted 2004-09-05 10:06 PM


"On cloud 111 ...
That were our thought of heaven ...

See her once there ...
When we have passed and allowed to be aware"


I enjoyed this part the most, Jes. It's
nice to see your smiling words here again.

Jes
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Denmark
5 posted 2004-09-06 01:02 AM


Hi Midnitesun

Yeah those two sentences tells alot. And thanks for ya comment.

Smiles

Jes / Dreamer

Life is for me to be - but always with a smile !

MGROVES
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6 posted 2004-09-07 05:00 AM


i really liked this


Jes
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7 posted 2004-09-07 06:20 AM


Hi MGROVES

Glad ya enjoyed.

Smiles

Jes / Dreamer

Life is for me to be - but always with a smile !

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