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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-07-09 08:32 AM

we had a hallway there
in our thoughts
with all of the doors
equal on each side

you wanted to open your own
or at least go through first
you did appreciate me though
being a gentleman

I watched you at the window
as you looked down
your eyes were kids at christmas
I watched your mouth say wow

you asked me to come see
and you described what was there
you asked if I had ever seen it before
and pouted when I said I had

so I took you to my side
and opened the doors
you smiled happy then
when you saw the reflections

and realized we were but mirrors

_____________

Dark

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (07-09-2004 09:04 AM).]

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2004-07-09 08:34 AM

I love when that happens.

you are sssssssssssssssoooooooooooooo good.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2004-07-09 08:36 AM

smiling a great big grin...this ironically reminds me of someone very special. unbeknown to you, thank you for those memories.
A Beautiful write, as always
Thank you for this lovely song....Good moring sir...wishing you a great day and weekend as well.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2004-07-09 08:36 AM

The imagery
is magnificent...
keep those mirrors polished...

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2004-07-09 08:45 AM

wonderful images Dark, loved this morning morsel you leave us...

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

5 posted 2004-07-09 09:09 AM

..tasty morning reflections, Dark One...

~K~

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2004-07-09 09:45 AM

Dark Stranger
Good thoughts, good write, good read.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

7 posted 2004-07-09 11:30 AM

I liked this very much.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Martie

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

8 posted 2004-07-09 11:40 AM

DS

"your eyes were kids at christmas"

What a lovely image, that. Hugs to you, my friend! As always your writing is, wow!

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

9 posted 2004-10-19 10:44 AM

Incredible creativity! Um... Wish I would have been tuned into your writing sooner.
miscellanea

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

10 posted 2004-10-19 10:41 PM

its nice when someone wears your own face too

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