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Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10
Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2004-09-02 12:01 PM


You can't see me,
Closed minded you'll always be.
Look...but don't make your eyes strain,
I'VE GONE INSANE.
Can you hear me I'm alive inside you,
It's a contradiction of what to do.
You can't see me,
Ignorant..forever you'll be.
Look but don't make your eyes strain,
I'VE GONE INSANE.
I gotta live with it everyday,
I'm goin' insane better go away.
I am the unseen...
You can't see me,
Your eyes won't leave me be.
Look but don't make your eyes strain,
Because a kid like me is going insane.
I have become the Unseen,
You...can't...see...me..



© Copyright 2004 Kyle - All Rights Reserved
Copperbell
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since 2003-11-08
Posts 956

1 posted 2004-09-02 12:17 PM


I hear you
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2004-09-02 12:29 PM


some things are just better felt
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-09-02 12:31 PM


Wow...just WOW!!
Hugs~

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have sand in my shoes. ~

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
4 posted 2004-09-07 01:15 PM


I know
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