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Open Poetry #33

How Silently ...

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

0 posted 2004-07-09 05:03 AM

How silently the will of love
moves along emotive waves
to gently titillate
the contours of my hair.

I feel its tenderness
and longing to be near
and in my surrender
there’s no one here to know
the deep abiding love
emitted from my soul.

The grid perhaps unstable
veers and dips haphazardly
and receivers in the dark
left alone to guess, presume,
but I only see one face
and only hear one voice
calling me and pulling me
above reality.

And from the ecstasy
and beauty of soul love
there appears a loneliness
no one here can know.

How silently the will of real
claims precedence today
and forcibly removes me
from the world of only soul
to bear alone the knowing
of love’s awesome energy!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-07-09 05:19 AM

love the title! the poem...wow

love that ending!

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

2 posted 2004-07-09 05:40 AM

Thanks Dixie. I'm going away for a little while. Take care.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2004-07-09 11:04 AM

Helen

Your journey of grace and longing is so lovely yet so poignant. I wish you only the best.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

4 posted 2004-07-09 11:39 AM

This makes me feel rather sad, it whispers of lonliness.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

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