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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2004-09-01 07:30 PM


What If Sunday Never Comes

What would I do on a Monday, if
I wanted to be close to you,
and you told me that you were busy
and Sunday would have to do.
Or Tuesday, what if I desired
your companionship, what if I
needed someone to scratch my back,
what if, what if.
How about Wednesday, suppose I
wanted to take a moonlit walk on
the beach in the silky sand, would
you be available to accompany me,
would you understand.
What if on a Thursday, I was hungry
for a kiss, would you be there to
take care of me, would you caress
my lonely lips.
And Friday, that could be a special
time, for a romantic dinner or a movie,
I could be yours and you could be mine.
Saturday would come and go without a
trace of your smiling face, and I would
find myself awaiting Sunday, so you could
fit me into my place.
Finally Sunday arrives, and I have survived
another week without you, but Sunday seems
to come and go so quickly and I find myself
in the middle of another week without you.

JamesLee
September01
2004


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Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
1 posted 2004-09-01 08:06 PM


I like this one very much - enjoyed.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

exhale
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since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada
2 posted 2004-09-01 10:06 PM


i adored this,i felt i was living through each day with you.
killer poem

Magnus
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since 2001-10-10
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3 posted 2004-09-01 10:11 PM


Not too shabby JM,  this reminds me of how
I feel every week when I head back to work
on Monday....Sundays never seem very long,
and certainly one would want that when such
passion is involved...

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