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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2004-09-01 07:11 PM

White fences
      fireflies striking light:

--We lit candles  random color
       liquid gliding      just before stars arrived; {in}
layer after layer fading daylight

Tonight the world will whisper
something about art:
love songs in many voices,
immortal shadows-- I will
only vaguely recall
            the orchid smell of your skin
in combinations of night and glow
              as if on faith

sentence by sentence

between dark shores
       &no solid ground

bolts of silk
   lovely and moving
because I love a dangerousmemory

Tonight there are            mirrors
on the side walk; petals
falling on cathedral steps

Still now, I know what you were
                     thinking:
we were cloud and shadow
        moving over snow

you were the last word

I've tried so hard to tell myself that you're gone though you're still with me
I've been alone all along..Now I'm bound by the life you left behind

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2004-09-01 07:17 PM

Tonight the world will whisper
something about art:
love songs in many voices,
immortal shadows-- I will
only vaguely recall
the orchid smell of your skin
in combinations of night and glow
as if on faith

sentence by sentence

Lady Lauren....You ARE art defined....and the most beautiful there could be....

Lordy gal, every word you write touches me..

you soar

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2004-09-01 07:20 PM

Enjoyed...James

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2004-09-01 07:46 PM

This is art - beautiful, shimmering -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-09-01 07:50 PM

Beautiful dear Lauren...
I have missed you and I'm SO glad to be home!
Big hugs~Nancy

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have sand in my shoes. ~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2004-09-01 09:39 PM

It just dawned on me why my muse goes away from time to time, it is so I can listen to good, no, great, poetry.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2004-09-01 10:15 PM

Smooth as silk Lauren. You write exceptionally, always do.

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

7 posted 2004-09-02 02:03 AM

Exquisite...... I'm so glad I made this my last poem of the day. I came because I always get a poetry lesson from your work, but I'll have to come back for that later.

For now, I'll go off to bed savoring what you did; how you did it is a question for the daytime.

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
______________Ratleader______________

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

8 posted 2004-09-02 02:11 AM

Lauren,
=========================================
-- I will
only vaguely recall
the orchid smell of your skin
in combinations of night and glow
as if on faith
=========================================

Nice. And I'm smilling at the replies. You do this well. Thank you. Peace.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2004-09-02 04:15 AM

just the right touches here

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

10 posted 2004-09-02 06:03 AM

Enjoyed!

"A spring shower was cause to run
Until you twirled me in the rain" ~ BDC

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