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Open Poetry #33

blueshoe botheration

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-09-01 04:04 AM

post hole hollow in a gravel sky
blind miner with his light
call it a moon til night noon
before it is a dollar
with the other side shiny

do dawn dogs have tails
when they sit behind
purple mountain picket fences
no nose dozed then orange
with morning wet on the end

and do they wag or bite
the wino man's gypsy dreams
when his feet are newsprint shoes
toelio stagger shagin' a bowl
of facedown concrete cornflakes

when windmen rake the leafless trees

__________

Dark

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (09-01-2004 08:04 AM).]

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-09-01 06:52 AM

How you do this...
leaves me some days
stumbling for a response

and feeling very
inept.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2004-09-01 07:22 AM

You ARE the master....and I love every minute of your thoughts and reads. Slow morning hugs to you buddie.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2004-09-01 07:31 AM

You paint with the words of a master genius
leaving me using a dictionary, and I still
have trouble understanding...
just for me, you should leave footnotes

Smiling..good Morning, wishing you a fine day...hugs
Me

E S West
Member

since 2004-08-31

Posts 116
California

4 posted 2004-09-01 01:32 PM

I do so much enjoy reading your unique, and vividly visual words...great stuff...

E S West

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

5 posted 2004-09-01 08:31 PM

D- you the man.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

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