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ecrivan
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my own state

0 posted 2004-08-31 12:31 PM


Why bother to write about a twist
a turn towards greater expanses
or regress into centers of vortices
of the symbolism of continuous loops
an expansion towards the infinite
of the attachment some between this shape
and modern man's grumblings

Why bother to write about spirals
yet they can be found on flower heads
yet we may just be headed on expanded loops
away from big boom theories
and apes descended from trees
towards fresher revelations
or an older assertion
there is no beginning without an end to something else
no end to that beginning without that something else
feature film heros walking to a distant focal end points
spiral loops coming closer to meet observers
why bother to see or experience them
it's only an approaching funnel
an enlarged ringlet
this spiral....




© Copyright 2004 Martin Dansky - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2004-08-31 01:07 AM


What a view!
Majestic...impressive heights here Martin.
Good to read you.
TD

Kristabell
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since 2003-11-29
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Portland, OR
2 posted 2004-08-31 01:11 AM


This spiral is what we call life. Very well expressed.
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3 posted 2004-08-31 08:42 AM


Why bother? Because we learn, we grow... and if we're very lucky... we get to read great poems like this. *S*
Sunshine
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4 posted 2004-08-31 08:48 AM


quote:
Why bother to write about spirals

http://www.mathematische-basteleien.de/spiral.htm

because everything has a beginning, circles outward until it's end?



You know, Martin, you have succeeded in dizzying up the rest of my day!


Tim
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5 posted 2004-08-31 08:50 AM


enjoyed the write.
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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6 posted 2004-08-31 08:55 AM


I love spirals, and want them tatooed all over my body...teehee, silly mood here
anyway, spirals are perhaps invisible dimensions, which indeed created the big bang...so we have to write about them, we must...silly man...
Seriously
This was an amazing write, enjoyed reading very much

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