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HopeS
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0 posted 2004-08-28 12:05 PM



Heart On The Wings Of Hope

Sending my warmest thoughts
Here I am writing once again
Hoping I can lift your spirits
Or perhaps ease your pain

Saved is the place in my heart
That you can always depend
Given for all the tomorrows
Where love shall never end

I am writing these words today
Because I am thinking of you
As I send my heart to yours
With love timeless and true

This place is set aside for you
Far across the distant shores
Heart on the wings of hope
Where my love forever soars


HopeĀ©2004

© Copyright 2004 HopeS - All Rights Reserved
EvocativeVerse2
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1 posted 2004-08-28 07:17 AM


Hello HopeS. I think this is the first time I have read you. I like this poem. I really like the rhymed words. Well done. I enjoyed reading this a lot.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

HopeS
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2 posted 2004-08-28 07:27 AM


thank you so much EvocativeVerse2 for your kind reply ..... since I  began writing all my poems  seem to flow easier for me in rhyme, some people don't like rhyming poems so  I am pleased you enjoyed
Hope


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3 posted 2004-08-28 01:26 PM


Hope~
I have treasured your 'rhyming' for years now~
Bless you on this day~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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passing shadows
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4 posted 2004-08-29 02:48 AM


at least you can still write of love...
froggy
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5 posted 2004-09-01 02:03 AM


Beautiful HopeS.

I really like this it speaks loud and clear.

:-)

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