Open Poetry #33 |
Here We Go Again |
Annie Shadow Junior Member
since 2004-05-02
Posts 27Drifting |
Who's the doctor? Who's the queen? Watch your step You've come between The brilliant patterns of your eyes The obvious, the small suprise The moment that I realize Hmmm...I need you again Who's the killer? Who's the king? Watch the sun Blind everything The wonders of your smooth, sweet touch Makes me miss your love so much Use my heartache as a crutch Hmmm...I need you again Who's the villian? Who's the rose? Watch me fall That's what you chose The melting feeling from your heart Takes my hand and then we start To fix the bonds we've pulled apart Hmmm...I need you again Oh... And you... You know it, too You need me every now and then So...Baby, Here we go... Here we go again |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I liked the feel and flow of this. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Annie~ I like the sing-songy chant of this~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Annie - I don't think I've read your work before -- welcome to PIP. I really liked the rhythm of this poem a lot. ....jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes...I like this |
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