Open Poetry #33 |
To Touch A Brighter Star |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Oh, but to touch that brighter star there, shining in a far off galaxy distant in the future. If I could reach past that source of your pain and sprinkle stardust that has floated down from the heavens and blow it gently across the trails that you walk in hopes that perhaps tomorrow your steps could fall lighter so that you might tread softer upon that path within. I would fly straight through the heavens holding your hand to make all of your dreams come true. Dance! Oh how we would dance and the Gods in celestial skies would be jealous when Luna shone her light upon two souls held in harmonies delight. There are stars millions in the universe but yours.... yours shines brighter than those that just hang there clinging........to the darkness. (c)dmsmith 08-23-02 (repost from open 22) It's better than I could have planned.. it's made me who I am... {Trace Adkins} |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
this is magical and whimsical!!! smiling here |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Great! Dripping with stardust and night-time magic. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
For so many reasons I find this so very special! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good stuff |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely....James |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Very wonderfully written. You have a kind heart. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
FriendieGirl~ This is ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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