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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Quests This is one of the great moments Connection incarnate To know I can do what I wish, Where others took pen to paper, I take a window to world… And in my world Crickets hum, criss-crossing an I am, at 8:32 CST In my own yard, my own dream, watching sunsets Set, slowly, in harbor time, somewhere else, as Katydids sing I am in listen time, with dog paws scratching deck Ears alert, tail motioned in drum of air, This is….summer… This is heartbeat, song sung, relaxation of belly to deck; Quirp to quirp quip of bird talk Me in the dark and you, in shadows, Siren song to a place unknown; with crickets overchirping And some mosquito in quest of Blood. Like you. This is the blood quest. Dream well, and long. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I can feel the summer eve- and I like the mosquito on his quest, I've not thought of it like that before  Susan |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea I'm right there with you!  |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I hate those things, thank goodness we don't have many. Nice evening spent in thought this was. |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Yep, this one I like. A keeper. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love that last line |
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