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Ovarian Misconception
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Ovarian Misconception It was just a smudge of cloudy foam On ultra sound of black and white A place much like the birth of poem Held dear by tears when read with light A branch held it within the curve To make a path to life to verve This place of reverence of intrigue Of masterful carpentry It stayed awhile this warm like nest Built by love and not neglect It was a beginning to this end A place that time has broken in Weep not for the flower spent For youth to last when heaven bent It is only flesh now purpose free And a blessing to the mastery Weep for this sad look inside My mother place with battle lines That was a plan of great perfection Is now my ovarian misconception --------- a repost with a bow to woman who understand me saying I had this experience again today, and also the men that know the complications of the internal clock. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) I don't believe me or any man will ever fully understand the woman's internal clock, but know deep down with all your heart that I do understand women need support always and especially at these moments so I send angel hugs out, yay! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well, and didn't I ask you to tell me how things went? And you did... How well you did... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Noah! It's really good to have a reply from you...it feels like it has been a long time. Thank you. I hope all is well with you! Karilea...not fun...and no information...like all those kinds of things. Thanks...Hugs! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"It stayed awhile this warm like nest Built by love and not neglect It was a beginning to this end A place that time has broken in" My thoughts Martie...  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Martie, though a repost, it is new to my eyes and I am quite pleased you gave me the opportunity to read this. Sometimes things are not what they appear, and sometimes they are.... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes...I know... but I have a feeling all will be well... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Martie? Heart hugs sweet lady....  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
 -- a very good piece of writing on a difficult subject, I am sure. Take care, Martie. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
joining in the hugs |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
*hug* |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Martie, double hugs....didn't see this before, glad to see it now. Peace to you m'friend. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I loved the rhyme, and yes, remember the feeling too. I'm standing in the *hug* line. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
You find poignant beauty in everything....because it comes from within, of course. There's beauty, poetry in everything you see, because you're in the scene. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie Just like a hug, |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Weep for this sad look inside My mother place with battle lines That was a plan of great perfection Is now my ovarian misconception Martie, you are a gem...thank you dear one for this lovely verse... Have a great weekend...smiles and hugs |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Weep for this sad look inside I try to avoid looking inside some parts of me too often... for I weep each time I do... and feel like a complete misconception... my mother place might as well have never existed... it only reminds me of my multitude of lacks... tolled by each tick of clock in a neverending yearn. *S* Lovely write! *S* |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
even if I don't really understand I do know this is more wonderfully written poetry from Martie - Paul |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
a tender write on such a difficult subject; I echo what Ratleader said. |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
You've an ability to express yourself in lovely verse on any subject. Yes, Ratleader did say it well. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
my season has passed...but...thank goodness for the harvest before the famine began...you have written this so tenderly.. im keeping it for my library. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
this too is mastery...exceptional.. |
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