Open Poetry #33 |
sacred circle |
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Ignoring your carefully drawn lines of composure, I stepped outside, drew my own circle of fire, let my asbestos mindset save me from your damning flames. Don’t even think ‘bout stepping inside. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Don’t even think ‘bout stepping inside. You tell em Kacy! I love this, so powerful! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(chuckling).. now there indeed is a warning... nicely written ma'am.... remind me not to play with matches in the future |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL just burnin off some steam for someone else |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
lol.. sounds a bit more like flames than steam... one could get burned badly I think trying to cross the lines you drew here.. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
lol...Kacy, I think this is one time they want to stay away from the fire!! burn........... |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Ignoring your carefully drawn lines of composure, I stepped outside, drew my own circle of fire," way cool write.... loved this |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
Now there's another way of "stepping outside". Safer too. -glider- |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wonderful write! Eric |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh yeah! |
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