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vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2004-08-25 10:04 AM

Once in the night, when moonbeams
Shone upon your face your
eyes sparkled with the
Light and they danced with ecstasy,
you said you love me
And I did.

Once in the night,
When moonbeams kissed the ocean
and when you said you loved me
My love danced with ecstasy
and with desire

Once in the night
softly and met with
Wanting,hearts beat softly
Within each, and breezes
of the night danced
to soft whispers in melody....

Once in the night where
you and I met
With sweet desire
our hearts beat together
for the first time, and
in the night's glow soft
whispers sang in melody.....

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2004-08-25 10:07 AM

I tried to find a favorite line here...but I honestly liked each and every one! Well done you two.. the blending here is smooth...

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2004-08-25 10:15 AM

Very well blended you two! This is absolutely lovely.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2004-08-25 10:19 AM

Vandana, Bill...you complement each other very well!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-08-25 12:48 PM

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2004-08-25 12:56 PM

VanDana & BillCharles~
*sighs* coming your way for this lovely~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2004-08-27 09:16 AM

Vandana - thank you for your words and working together on this poem. As you know I've been super busy with the new business, and not been able to do a lot of writing. I miss it a lot...

Bill

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

7 posted 2004-08-27 10:10 PM

Nice

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

8 posted 2004-08-28 09:34 AM

Very lovely blend of two wonderful poets

Vandana...I promise I haven't forgot about our duet, sometimes it just takes me a while to get to things

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

9 posted 2004-08-28 10:03 AM

Bill and V., you both did very well with
this.  And BC,  we have been wondering about
you.  Sounds like you have your hands full
of something good for you!!  Best of Luck..

Barry

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2004-09-01 07:19 PM

Enjoyed...James

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