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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-08-25 08:17 AM

down by easy
across and behind
taboo circle
there on the corner
with the dark windows

can you hear the music
seeping under the door
how it crawls up your leg
and makes you move nasty
even when you try to ignore

and the watcher's eyes
when you enter
they are so bold
looking at your gifts
like they were for them

everyone there it seems
has one thing in mind
or maybe two or a few
and don't care who knows
or who is close enough

to feel the skin of sin
______________

Dark

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-08-25 08:23 AM

can you hear the music
seeping under the door
how it crawls up your leg
and makes you move nasty
even when you try to ignore

outstanding, not to mention, just a tad sensual, a tad...smiles and hugs
good one

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2004-08-25 08:29 AM

ah.. seen such places.. and you captured it well here..

nicely done sir

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2004-08-25 08:32 AM

Well this whisked me back
to the French Quarters...

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

4 posted 2004-08-25 08:33 AM

its gritty
dirty
its part of everyday
and yes, as leeJ said
its kind of sensual too...
but sometimes raw can feel that way

enjoyed this

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

5 posted 2004-08-25 09:04 AM

and makes you move nasty love this image

Mxx

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2004-08-25 09:13 AM

so then...let's dance....

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

7 posted 2004-08-25 09:15 AM

down by easy
across and behind
taboo circle
there on the corner
with the dark windows

You have the most awesome way of presenting your images to the reader DS,
and darn, do I LOVE those images.

Wanna Dance?

sigheyes
Member

since 2001-04-25

Posts 323
the winds of destiny

8 posted 2004-08-25 09:19 AM

Incredible writing!

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

9 posted 2004-08-25 09:21 AM

oh, been there too?
hehe
K

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

10 posted 2004-08-25 09:23 AM

The seduction of music and the boldness of the flow of the body as it moves to the beat, the rhythm bringing out the primal in us. A feasting place for the hungry -

Enjoyed-

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

11 posted 2004-08-25 11:06 AM

DS

If it didn't actually exist...it does now!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

12 posted 2004-08-25 11:14 AM

maybe a healing joint for someone who feels invisible?
as always, you sketch breathing charcoal portraits

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

13 posted 2004-08-25 12:57 PM

Lee stole my verse

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

14 posted 2004-08-25 10:22 PM

we all are, unfortunately...

enjoyed

All of my impurities are right here on my sleeve. This is Me"---Faith Hill

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