Open Poetry #33 |
My Peter Pan, Never Never Land |
A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Moon shines bright, glittering stars blanket the night, You arrive in the moonlight, Upon my open window, you stand, I gently step out to fly, I grasp your hand, Off we go to never never land, Through puffy clouds we fly, together you and I, floating through the magical, midnight sky, With you i never grow old, young at heart, i feel so bold, youthful love, warm ,tender, my heart is never cold, it surrenders, The journeys you take me to, magical places, full of wonder and surprise, I am lost in you, seeing loves glow deep in your blue eyes, Excitement, joy, laughter, forever inside your world, of happily ever afters, There is a kiss, one I have been saving, to plant upon your lips, not to miss, this...life changing moment, that time keeps on playing, I could remain here forever, inside loves never never land, my heart never growing old, loving you forever, My Peter Pan.... "Yes I will Come and fly away with you and leave my world behind" [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (08-25-2004 06:17 AM).] |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
A fantastic poem...yes i am Peter Pan...my heart is free....this is a well written and wonderful poem of fantasy and your loving heart..thank you.. Goldenrose.xxxxxxxx |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Your most welcome ..My Peter pan....where are you taking me to next? what journey awaits us? Wendy xxxxxx |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
absolutely stunning, brought back many memories for me. Thank you for writing and sharing |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Lovely- magical - enjoyed. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
magical....absolutely beautiful! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh...this is PRECIOUS! |
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