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waiting on a wish |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan 
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resting my head on your lap I could sleep away a thousand years comfort in an imaginary girl ....a thought floating in fantasy ...she smiles as she pulls back my hair ....a future past ...in the changing seasons ahead ..... JWIII 8-24-04 |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
ahhh, yes....very comforting. and the title was first to draw me in.... very nice Wolfy  |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
i feel better after that sweet reply , thanks m , ~j |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"....a future past ...in the changing seasons ahead" I liked this line here a lot... maybe because it's almost Fall and that is a very retrospective(as well as introspecitve) time for me |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
i agree ...i love the fall and winter ..both great times to write ty |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Yes, I like this. I like its feel. SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
it has much feeling , dreams and wishes ty ~jw |
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