Open Poetry #33 |
Sky City |
time prophet Member
since 2003-07-30
Posts 371In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees |
Phallic like it struts the sky proclaiming its presence. Whilst in the halls below twenty-four by seven false glitz and glitter sparkles, in the permanent man made twilight, and the constant ka-ching of bling can be heard changing hands with a speed that is absurd. The captains of misery sit at their tables laundering the wallets of any passers-by foolish enough to sit, and fall to the guile of their smile. The mechanical moneylenders lurk in every nook and cranny only too willing to bleed your plastic, until the bank balance has as much spring as a bungee elastic. Such it is in this house of sin, where no one needed to invite you in. There’s only one safe bet…… you didn’t get what you came for. Phallic like it struts the sky ignoring the obscenities in the halls below. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a reality check write, complete with picture. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Excellent -- well worded, written and it carries the truth with a pointed thrust -- enjoyed the voice used. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
There is something that makes me want to go there, none the less... Enjoyed this! |
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time prophet Member
since 2003-07-30
Posts 371In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees |
Midnitesun, Thank you for the read, for some the reality of it doesn't come until too late. Susan, Thank you, for some its a truth you wish they didn't have to learn. Martie, It draws some like a magnet, but even I have been once or twice. |
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