Open Poetry #33 |
and I weep |
Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Tears fall As my heart weeps From the bite of Sorrow With its bitter edged teeth You linger in your passing But I know the time comes It is in the anticipation That the heart comes undone Why cannot it not be As if stepping through a veil Why must you tarry In your pain ridden hell And I weep What is it about coming death That it must be feared and decried Why cannot it not just come And one pass as if whispering a sigh Would be better that way Swift, final, no apprehension No drawn out suffering No inevitable affliction No sorrow filled hearts Of loved ones drawn near Just a swift deft stab Leaving only the fall of tears And I cry What bitter sweet misery To have you here, yet gone To know as days pass Your time passes on I would hold you here forever Given my most selfish soul But my heart would bid you go Let the pain cease its toll And with a quick step Free of these earthly bonds You will pass into freedom Of the blessed beyond. And I will weep s.a.t. Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Susan, you reached, and touched, deeply, with this. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
beautifully sad from the deepest and sacredest spot, if only we could pick the way it comes for those we love |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Let only memories lie within as souls pass into starlit skies upon a moment of new begin while those behind dry weeping eyes. For dreams and memories bring smiles and carry far upon an ocean's swell into the heaven's limitless miles as we bade them a warm farewell. Beautiful thoughts Susan, thoughts that bring a moistness to eyes, a slight lump in one's throat....and so many memories of times enjoyed...forever! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you Sunshine and Inkedgoddes for your warm words. And Barry, what beauty you gift me. Sorry to be so melancholy, but there are days when it is just plain old hard. 'tis one of those days. I appreciate your warm hearts -- Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Contabo Member
since 2001-11-21
Posts 159 |
AND...you write!!!! weeping can bring out the writer in us. Contabo |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
This piece brought tears to my eyes in that it made me think of my grandfather whom I lost earlier this year...I know well the emotions you portray here... ~Live and Laugh~ Don't look to me for perfection for I will surely let you down. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Susan, you tug heart strings with this....and show us the beauty within your own heart. Hugs to you for this one...and peace... |
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time prophet Member
since 2003-07-30
Posts 371In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees |
Well stated Susan, this will no doubt touch all of those that sit and wait. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
shoot... you wrote it so well... thank you, because I couldn't put words to it. Take care. Always, Alyssa Poems are made by fools like me, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gahlee |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you all for your kindness and warmth. It is nice to have a place to express oneself and know you'll be understood - thank you, thank you - Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Susan~ What a softly touching render of the heart~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thanks Marge -- Hugs to you Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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