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Acts of Lesser Gods
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Acts of Lesser Gods |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I glanced through half lit window where neon from the hotel sign cast tetra colors on the wall and listened to the words play music as they ran across the back of my mind trying to remember how they sounded coming from some other lips than my own and how they held anything the spaces between did not let drain away and knew I would settle for even a lie that I might believe if for only a moment in pretend then turned and let the curtain fall Act II can now begin with thanks to Muted... for her offering and its inspire... [This message has been edited by Cpat Hair (08-25-2004 08:55 AM).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I glanced through half lit window where neon from the hotel sign cast tetra colors on the wall and listened to the words play music as they ran across the back of my mind trying to remember how they sounded coming form some other lips than my own and how they held anything the spaces between did not let drain away and knew I would settle for even a lie that I might believe if for only a moment in pretend ================================ lesser gods? perhaps... but never lesser poetry...not from you pen... not ever.... |
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msflame Member
since 2002-05-21
Posts 188 |
Enjoyed the read and the form. Nicely done, the title is VERY cool. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
and knew I would settle for even a lie that I might believe if for only a moment in pretend How very cool is this? WAY COOL. Really enjoyed this one Cpat! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I love the way muted's write inspired yours. They are very different, but both writes have great punch. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ron It's wonderful when one who inspires so many, is inspired himself!  |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
*sigh* yes right there is where the feeling lingers...... You found it, and made it your own.. Ron, this one hurts like hell.  a pleasure and honour to know you, but you know that.... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 Kudos to both of you. Sigh. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
There is a word I've been searching for which I cannot find that describes the feeling of this to me, ah well, "I enjoyed it's voice" is going to have to suffice.  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Nice...very nice! Been there, Done that...Went back and did it again! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I read Dawn's post earlier and when I read this, well...it works. I always enjoy your voice, sometimes more than others and this was a sweet inspiration...  |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Love it when the formless chemicals of two minds mix When two completely different elements of brain tissue are touched by philosophic alchemy, and what comes out is gold (as is this poem....) enjoyed -------ice ><> Come read to me some poem, |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
brought back a very tender rememberance for me...lovely write and it couldn't be said any better then Ice has done...pure magic, pure gold. Dreamy write! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah.. thanks to all for the nice words.. they are appreciated |
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