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O'ver The Sea
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O'ver The Sea |
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msflame Member
since 2002-05-21
Posts 188 |
I could be a bird today a wren or mourning dove be free to roam the skies of blue to slip and fall in love or I could dance across a stage be light in form and style-- pour all the music over me and let it be my smile. don ivory shoes and opal pearls a docker turquoise T, work on a verse, unroll all of the poetry in me. So if you look across the field or toward the maple tree, I am the bird, the leaf that’s moving somewhere o’ver the sea. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Ah, to be a bird today, yes. Enjoyed this.  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
or I could dance across a stage be light in form and style-- pour all the music over me and let it be my smile. smiling here, much enjoyed this verse. Well done. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 I think I saw you this morning.  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done... |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
This, indeed, dances, and makes me think of that wonderful song, "Somewhere Beyond the Sea". Nicely done. Bob |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
work on a verse, unroll all of the poetry in me. ========================== yesss indeed...isnt that the way of poet and muse.. lovely rhymed inspire here...was a treat to read aloud. |
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msflame Member
since 2002-05-21
Posts 188 |
Thank you all for reading. I wanted to express openness and freedom in this. |
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