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Open Poetry #33

Tangled Thoughts

huddersfield
Junior Member

since 2003-12-29

Posts 25
huddersfield, England

0 posted 2004-08-24 02:36 PM

Tangled thoughts,
Mish mashed in a puzzle
Compact so tight
That, as hard as I try,
The solution seems to be
Drawn into the centre
By an iron grip,
That grasps with the strength
Of a thousand asps,
With a bite to match,
And a venom that intoxicates
The senses with a plethora of
Misjudgements, which guide my hand
In tasks to no avail…

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2004-08-24 02:46 PM

time to take a deep breath? maybe grab some Benadryl?

hope you find your solution

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

2 posted 2004-08-24 02:47 PM

Well said -- I can see the struggle to overcome and find the answers.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

3 posted 2004-08-24 04:24 PM

And sometimes you just get in deeper and deeper. You have good images in this one. I like it.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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