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RMW
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0 posted 2004-08-24 02:03 PM


The Oblate

I think of fronts,
of weather's indecisive state
when hot and cold are up against it.
What must the monks sense
within their common, temperate mass
when, suddenly, at Lauds or Matins,
a whiff of 'Sure' or 'Old Spice'
celebrates.

RMW

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-08-24 02:05 PM


You've the ability
to turn nature
into itself
and stop
on a
dime.

So GOOD to see you here!

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2004-08-24 02:06 PM


LOL, this one tickled my nose.
nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2004-08-24 02:08 PM


what a nice surprise...


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RMW
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4 posted 2004-08-24 02:09 PM


Sunshine ... GOOD morning. And, thank you. Bob

Midnitesun .... Smiling. It must have been the "must". Thank you. Bob

RMW
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5 posted 2004-08-24 02:10 PM


M ... to me too. Thank you. Bob
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6 posted 2004-08-24 02:17 PM


Well done, and so nice to see you again!
msflame
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7 posted 2004-08-24 02:37 PM


Good read. The "Old Spice" really set this off.
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8 posted 2004-08-24 06:16 PM


Sir.. it is always pleasure to read your words and to ponder on the way they are woven into such concise and yet such vivd images
Martie
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9 posted 2004-08-24 08:00 PM


Hi Bob

You enrich Passions when ever you drop in with your words...so good to see you!  

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