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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA 
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I remember the time to build When we set a castle on a hill. I remember Jack and Jill With Will tumbling after. I remember the laughter When we all came tumbling down. I remember what came after When Will was met with a frown. I don’t know the future I don’t read minds quite yet. But history Is a patient mother Repeating herself over again. Jill will find another. Jack will take a lover. Jack and Jill Will hike the hill. This time, not together. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
clever you, really liked the style of this... and...connect with its meaning....very nice Jo!  |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Yes, very clever indeed, Jo, but isn't it sad that we tumble so many times in different directions. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
powerful write |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Good morning, Jo. This was a different write for you. Cute and clever, spiced with sad... It kind of reminds me of advice a mother would give her children. I hope everything is going great at work and home. luv ya, miscellanea |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
A wonderful write gal.....I liked this |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
nicely done... M |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
BRAVO!! what a delight to read...so much wisdom and truth within...I love it... |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Excellent! Eric |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I like the way you play with the rhymes in this one. Nicely done. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Interesting, jo. I wonder what lay behind these words, what the thought process was. Well done. SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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msflame Member
since 2002-05-21
Posts 188 |
I felt kind of warm thinking about Jack and Jill, thank you. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Jo, you amaze me with the wit and humor that you put into your poetry. Says alot about the person behind the pen. Good things...very good things... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Jo "history Is a patient mother" Yes she is!  |
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