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Open Poetry #33

You

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-08-23 09:43 AM

You
mood me
when the soon
becomes now and
the touch rests upon

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

1 posted 2004-08-23 10:42 AM

oh, yes
i like the way youve done this

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

2 posted 2004-08-23 10:49 AM

Wow... Yep, another great write.
Like the layout, and the very small "me."

JL

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

3 posted 2004-08-23 11:10 AM

Oh my...this is absolutely lovely...

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

4 posted 2004-08-23 11:17 AM

Well done - like it.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-08-23 12:28 PM

oh...wow

that's cool!

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