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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Hush… Can you hear woven imagery? Similes with remarkable IQ’s…like Man eating wolves stalking perception Devouring mind illnesses…. Deliberate precision, desire, intimacy Manifestation skilled Inherently human message boards With a stranger’s tears of priceless tolls Trapped in a smile Almost unlawful, intentional stokes Recovery that won’t turn around Painting spread by some incurable virus Lying there in shock, with breast enlargements Graphics of submission, unfolding mouths Outsmarting this season’s game Drinking at a new tavern Sneaking a Mickey to wheezing crawls Some digital study of puritan hardball Peeling back the face of information Blue and torn shells once malignant Charitable isn’t it? Voodoo strategy wearing contact lenses Eating birthday cake Throwing away Viagra prescriptions Welcome to year 01 |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
let the wolves play in the other room give me the windows and the morning and this is super |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Lee, you are so far past my grasp dear friend, your thoughts seem to so outweigh mine, I feel you write a thousand stories in a few short verses, it would interest me so to know how long it takes you to put these works to paper. You amaze me with description but lose me in the maze. Always a pleasure and education Lee, sorry I can’t react more as you do for me. Good to see you here dear friend, maybe again tomorrow. Sincerely Rick |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
You are such a deep thinker... and as others have said, there is so much to read and enjoy within your lines. Have a nice day...isn't it beautiful today??? *s M |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Wow... Such very deep thoughts here, I do agree, a marvelous write Lee J. JL  |
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