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Open Poetry #33

Last Night...

Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 2004-08-21 11:46 PM

Last night I sailed beyond what is
Upon a ship of rhyme,
Past Orion and his minions,
Unto the rim of time,
Within my hands I held her words,
My eyes drank of her presence,
Penned across white parchment fine,
Aglow in luminescence
From the essence of her being,
Her soul imprinted there
Upon the fibers of the page,
An ode of heart’s declare.
Whispered breath of muse’s song,
Quilled with beauty’s trace,
Transported from the skies above,
Angelic odist’s grace,
On heaven’s winds her words appeared,
And gathered me within,
To sail upon a ship of rhyme,
To commence of love’s begin.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2004-08-22 10:12 AM

Tim, words such as these do not deserve to
sit idly upon the pages blue...A goose egg
is a far cry from what should be of this
poem.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2004-08-22 10:20 AM

Magnus, as always, one step ahead of me...
and you are so right...
Tim's poetry should gather many readers...
I know he always draws me in!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-08-22 12:16 PM

beautiful!

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