Open Poetry #33 |
Three Stages |
RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
Three stages The young, like beasts upon their hands and knees taken first steps, from different views they see voices too hollow to form nothing but animal sounds the phase from which we first started out. In-between lies but the questioner searching for answers but with answers more questions comes now not sure what he or she should be the beast from which they first did spring or yet but a person who waits for love to touch And after all the answers come the god form he or she becomes knowing now the means of life not questioning the beast inside |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Lovely, philosophical write. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
we never know the answers...at any stage this write made me think, for sure |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
A very interesting, look into the evolution of an age-old theme. I really enjoyed it |
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