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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan 
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how can she just reappear like this ... was I waiting the past few weeks have felt like years falling into my sad places they are there when you need them the fears still surface I withdrew my stance walked away from you ....like a cold man there was reason in my eyes , you could not see twelve rings from the bell tower signals and signs I give in total release from my minds restrictions the standards of fake faces can I still find you in those crowded rooms , smoke filled and plenty of booze hope for direction in this play sidewalk...talk.....downtown stops and streetlights echo my childhood JW 8-21-04 |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"there was reason in my eyes , you could not see twelve rings from the bell tower signals and signs" Great lines! Enjoyed this haunting poem, aujussy wolf!  ....jo |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Jo picked the lines that resounded in me... she's good at that. Well done, Sir! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sometimes it's best to walk away  |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
A Dub: mm hm, signals & signs I know this haunted path well you captured the feeling K |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Hey James, I am listening to the Wallflowers . . . how appropriate - this reminds me of 6th Avenue Heartache . . . and a couple of ghosts I have been trying to avoid myself . . . I have missed you . . . |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
James~ 'how can she just reappear like this ... was I waiting' I am left with a wonderful image at these words~ Thank you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*` ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
The title fits nicely James, you have penned the feel well. |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
thanks for the great replys , we all have our own ghosts ....lol booooooo , little w , long time no see babe  stay in touch ~jwolf |
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