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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2004-07-08 01:52 PM

Category six
jumpstart my heart
come and go
hit and run lover

you're a number off the charts

prettyboy blue

o how u teased me.......

ooooo baby
your eyes stole the
vocabulary of blues
right from the sleeping sky,

flourescent, effervecent

tip of the iceberg.....

you made me gush
blueberry slush

o how you cast a spell on me

florescent lights
your name in the stars

light me up
in the dark
meadlowlark

sideshow,rollercoaster
flipflop, my heart on a string

sing me a sonnet
i'm wild with desire

heartchaser, breaker
rip apart my world in two

badboy when you winked at me

james dean had nothing on you

o daddeo

you left me breathless...........

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (07-09-2004 07:34 AM).]

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

1 posted 2004-07-08 07:53 PM

You got the beat here.....cool...~P

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2004-07-09 01:42 AM

"you made me gush
blueberry slush"

Inked One -- This is a line I will never, ever, ever forget -- loved it! Loved the poem!

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

3 posted 2004-07-09 06:57 AM

you got my blood pumping in all directions...
yowser!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2004-07-09 07:28 AM

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

5 posted 2004-07-09 11:41 AM

What a rush! Really liked this.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

6 posted 2004-07-12 08:04 AM

This is really good....surprised you havent gotten more replies.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

7 posted 2004-07-12 08:15 AM

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2004-07-12 06:36 PM

WOW, a blueberry blush!
HMMMMM, musta been somethin special.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

9 posted 2004-07-13 01:31 PM

There is something marvelous about all your writes, and this one is marvelous too. Enjoyed the read.

JL

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

10 posted 2004-07-13 11:47 PM

thanks for stopping by

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

11 posted 2004-07-14 06:55 AM

yup yup yup...thats the way it is sometime...smiles and hugs

Extremely creative, yet knowing your heartfelt words...very well done, yet fun to read...happy tune

Thank you for writing and sharing

PassionandFun
Member

since 2003-07-30

Posts 60

12 posted 2004-09-30 01:31 PM

sounds like something written that should have come right out of my autobiography! Thanks for putting the hot stuff into the right words on paper!

Also sounds like that guy didnt know what he had!!! Fool!

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

13 posted 2004-09-30 01:34 PM

Helen this rocks!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

14 posted 2004-09-30 06:49 PM

thanks for bringing it back jeff, i almost forgot....

thanks for stopping by kids...

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

15 posted 2004-10-02 11:12 AM

Jump start......

....ok, but those don't really look like electrodes to me....

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______________Ratleader______________

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

16 posted 2004-10-02 12:28 PM

dang! don't ya love those kinds? send one my way if you got an extra

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

17 posted 2004-10-02 04:30 PM

I can almost see the sheet music to this one. Very cool write with some awesome lines in it ....... examples below :
***************
vocabulary of blues
right from the sleeping sky,

you made me gush
blueberry slush
****************

Much enjoyed.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

18 posted 2004-10-02 04:40 PM

*smile*

The Big Bopper would be proud . . .

*grin*

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

19 posted 2004-10-02 06:22 PM

inkedgoddess
Awesome piece

HoT'
~J

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

20 posted 2004-10-02 07:17 PM

Oh! When the Goddess expresses her desire!
Fantastic!
Love, Margherita

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