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Ishmael
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0 posted 2004-08-21 12:12 PM





Iggy had been circling the great metal dinosaur
Muttering all the while

“Can you believe how big these things have become?”
“I mean, look at how they’ve evolved away from anything
resembling a sporty or utile nature”

“But still” interjected the Worm, “You have to admit
that this is purely a mans’ invention”

“A hulking over-sized 4 wheel-drive entertainment center”

“If a woman had made it, it would be softer, rounder
You know…..fuzzy”

Dogboy, after some consideration, offered
“I believe that’s already been done”

“I think they were called Horsies”

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1 posted 2004-08-21 12:14 PM


ROARING with laughter here.
Love that one, so I'm keepin it.
hugs to you

Ishmael
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2 posted 2004-08-21 12:16 PM


Thank you midnitesun, I remember that you like this dogboy stuff.

Ish

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3 posted 2004-08-21 12:18 PM


LOL, anything you write, I will read.
But yes, this stuff is funny and original.

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4 posted 2004-08-21 12:27 PM


Enjoyed...James
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5 posted 2004-08-21 12:36 PM


Oh you!
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6 posted 2004-08-21 12:41 PM


good one
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7 posted 2004-08-21 03:22 PM


LMAO

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*grin*
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