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Suetang
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2004-08-19 10:39 PM



Bathurst Island, Australia

A place of peace and harmony
Where tranquility resides
Hopes and dreams roll in
Upon the incoming tide

As the light of day is fading
Shadows lengthen across the land
We stand facing one another
As our toes sink in the sand

The seagulls skim the water
Upon silken wings they fly
As the sun starts slowly setting
Casting beams across the sky

Mother Nature is at her finest
With so much beauty to behold
Nature's canvas is ever changing
With hues of crimson, pink and gold

We contemplate our future
As we gaze on out to sea
And as the moon comes into sight
We set our inhibitions free


I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2004 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
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1 posted 2004-08-19 10:46 PM


You do know how to paint a scene very well,
even with no picture...but so much better
with...have a pleasant eve SueT...

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2004-08-20 12:21 PM


Very nice...and I'll bet the water is still nice and warm...James
passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-08-20 03:55 AM


beautiful
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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4 posted 2004-08-20 08:59 AM


Mother Nature is at her finest
With so much beauty to behold
Nature's canvas is ever changing
With hues of crimson, pink and gold


Yes, indeed she is, my oh my, how utterly
beautiful...what a cherished sight to see
Your a very lucky woman
Thank you for not only sharing your beautiful word images, but also the picture as well...
whewwww...this is awesome

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