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exhale
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Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2004-08-19 08:31 PM


i wish you could insert music into your veins
let it flow through you
till your dancing in the streets
like theres a megaphone in the sky playing music,
i would smile all the time.

love feels something like that.

you're in my veins,
and you're making me dance in the streets
but i don't mind
it's like you're with me all the time
everywhere i go
everything i see
reminds me of you
your laugh,your eyes,your smell..
vanilla and soap.

you own these words that pour out of me
but you'll never own me
i'll lend you my heart,
if you promise not to break it.

© Copyright 2004 Chelsea - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
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1 posted 2004-08-19 08:42 PM


you own these words that pour out of me
but you'll never own me
i'll lend you my heart,
if you promise not to break it.

And I hope your heart is never broken...
in spite of such great odds that at some
time or another,  someone will...but they
always seem to heal...and hopefully we
learn from the healing.

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05
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Alberta, Canada
2 posted 2004-08-19 10:07 PM


Love isn't ownership it is sharing so if someone is trying to own you run in the other direction...The heart is for giving and receiving...your words show the depth of your heart...someone worthy of the gift you offer will be willing to give you as great a gift in return...Heartfelt words...

Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2004-08-20 12:48 PM


I don't know if I could handle a group-megaphone from the veins of the general populace.
But I enjoyed this write, and hope all is well in your life arena. BTW, I generally read everything you post, even when I don't know how to reply.

*sigh* and exhale,
sometimes, life is all "poetry"

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2004-08-20 01:13 AM


very touching
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