Open Poetry #33 |
young love. |
exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
i wish you could insert music into your veins let it flow through you till your dancing in the streets like theres a megaphone in the sky playing music, i would smile all the time. love feels something like that. you're in my veins, and you're making me dance in the streets but i don't mind it's like you're with me all the time everywhere i go everything i see reminds me of you your laugh,your eyes,your smell.. vanilla and soap. you own these words that pour out of me but you'll never own me i'll lend you my heart, if you promise not to break it. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
you own these words that pour out of me but you'll never own me i'll lend you my heart, if you promise not to break it. And I hope your heart is never broken... in spite of such great odds that at some time or another, someone will...but they always seem to heal...and hopefully we learn from the healing. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Love isn't ownership it is sharing so if someone is trying to own you run in the other direction...The heart is for giving and receiving...your words show the depth of your heart...someone worthy of the gift you offer will be willing to give you as great a gift in return...Heartfelt words... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I don't know if I could handle a group-megaphone from the veins of the general populace. But I enjoyed this write, and hope all is well in your life arena. BTW, I generally read everything you post, even when I don't know how to reply. *sigh* and exhale, sometimes, life is all "poetry" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very touching |
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